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this kind of doubling up runs throughout the poem, which dulls a lot of its potential impact (for me). "child refugee’s orphaned eyes"? just orphaned refugee is enough, child refugee orphan is overkill. "daily promise of sunrise"? what other kind of sunrise is there than daily? etc.
May 13, 2025, 1:55 PM